By
Miriam Axel-Lute
“How
did you make it so funny?” “Where did the idea come from?”
It is the Q&A session at a night of readings of world-premiere
plays, and playwright Anna Rand is being peppered with eager,
respectful questions from an audience that just laughed itself
silly at her Monty Python-esque satire, The Play That Never
Was Told, in which Villain keeps yelling at everyone to
call him “Vee-Vee,” Hero is scared of his own shadow, Wife
isn’t sure she wants to be rescued, and finally Narrator takes
things into his own hands.
If Rand
seems a little shy about explaining the finer points of her
writing technique and comic timing, well, it could be because
she’s a high-school sophomore, and this is the first time
an audience has ever seen her work.
Rand
is part of Albany High School’s first playwriting class, taught
by drama instructor Ward Dales. Her play was performed on
February 15 as part of the Promising Playwrights Festival,
part 1, directed by Alan Weeks.
While
Rand’s was a strong note on which to end the two-day festival,
its high quality was by no means an anomaly. It capped off
an impressive night that included Doll Face, by Emily
Thomas, a haunting and refreshingly unusual look at body-image
struggles through a girl’s relationship with, and berating
of, a fancy doll; Different, by Ania Perkins, a monologue
that refrains from spoon-feeding the audience the precise
nature of the difference the character is struggling with,
allowing viewers to project themselves into the work; To
Go, by Lauren Schaefer, a subtle relationship drama that
puts a memorable metaphor in the mouth of a sassy barista;
and Watch Her Egg, by Grahame Ramdene, a family portrait
that was uncomfortably realistic for Ramdene’s mother, who
happened to be sitting behind me. (“I’m gonna kill him!” she
said to her companion after the show. But she was grinning.)
Which
isn’t to say the plays were without flaws, or even without
indications of their writers’ youth. But that’s unavoidable.
I still would have paid a pretty penny to jump back a night
and catch the first night of these promising playwrights too.
Even better, I would have liked to fill the empty seats of
that third-full auditorium with people who didn’t have connections
to one of the playwrights or actors (I didn’t, but I think
most there did).
Admit
it: Many of us would go to such a performance primarily to
be “supportive,” expecting to cringe through the usual excesses
of adolescence and maybe be surprised by a gem or two. I certainly
wrote plenty of cringeworthy material in high school. But
I never had the benefit of Dales’ class critiquing me either.
It’s
a Friday (June 6), and the promising playwrights meander into
class. The room’s chalkboards are covered with a previous
class’ standardized-test answer key, and the chaos of June
(Who’s on what field trip? Who’s going to which prom?) is
rampant. But when Dales calls the class to order and asks
which of the three scenes students have prepared for the day
they should start with, there’s no shy pause, no excuses,
no crawling under the carpet. Instead: “Oh, do Devin’s! It’s
awesome.” “I want to hear Lauren’s.”
Each
scene is read out loud, and after each one, Dales says, “Written
critique. Go,” and the pens start scratching. After a short
few minutes, every student gives verbal feedback as well.
And here again, it’s hard to remember you’re listening to
high-school students.
It can
be like pulling teeth to get a group of experienced adults
to give feedback beyond a vague “I liked it” or “I didn’t
get it,” but in this class, students one after another fire
off precise, relevant comments: “The characters weren’t that
distinct,” “I wanted it to get to the point faster,” “You
did a good job of nailing gender roles,” “That was a great
word choice.” The writers don’t respond defensively. The class
argues civilly about how essential the accents are in a funny
scene by Tiffanie Hinds about two mobsters planning a hit,
and applaud Devin Wellspeak’s use of a prop when one of his
characters, who has just resisted a lover’s manipulative attempts
to stop her from striking out on her own, takes a deep breath
of the lover’s scent left on a piece of clothing.
Dales
says that, by his judgment, the students’ written critiques,
which involve number scoring and become an assignment’s grade,
are “right on the money nine and a half out of 10 times.”
If he thinks they’re off, he’ll average them with his own
assessment before assigning a grade, but he doesn’t discount
them entirely.
Of course
his students didn’t walk into class last September as master
critiquers. Lauren Schaefer recalls they did all start off
with the bland, tentative “It was good” responses, but, she
says, Dales told them basically, “You can’t do that.” Learning
some of the vocabulary of playwriting helped them make their
critiques more specific, she says, but they all agree that
it was at least as helpful to progressively get to know each
other and each other’s individual styles, something that the
informal atmosphere of the class and Dales’ energetic, playful
manner no doubt encouraged.
It took
a bit of a leap of faith to get there, though. Playwriting
is exceedingly tricky business, says Dales—basically the art
of “writing what isn’t there.” He didn’t want to do the typical
pussyfooting where you “encourage” young writers by just telling
them “Oh, that’s great.” Instead, he wanted to give them some
of the “disciplines of the form” and help them use those disciplines
to really work to improve their craft. “When [a writer] struggles,
and their struggles are on paper, then you get art,” he says.
So his
gut told him that a playwriting class should be seminar style.
But in a high school? At an age when students are notoriously
shy and fearful of judgment?
Yes,
apparently. In creating the class, Dales, who has a long and
distinguished career as an actor and director, and says he
fell into teaching by accident 14 years ago, pulled together
a loose structure, but kept room for improvisation and the
philosophy that “if I’m having fun, they’re having fun.” And
he knows he ended up with something special. “How many times
do you hear high-school students singing each other’s praises?”
he asks.
There
were other challenges to introducing a playwriting class at
the high-school level. Unlike other writing forms, a play
script is incomplete until someone has interpreted it. “Theater
is completely collaborative,” says Dales, and it’s not that
useful to “write in a vacuum.” So he enlisted the Albany High
School Theatre Ensemble, the after-school drama club, to perform
readings of the class’s 10-minute plays. Even the apparently
calm, poised playwrights say this first Promising Playwrights
Festival reduced them to a bundle of nerves, first by having
peers outside the familiar small confines of the class working
from their scripts (“What if they’re having to act it, and
they hate it?”) and then by having to sit still while, as
Wellspeak describes it, a “silent audience” judged what they
saw. But they made it through, and seem cheerful at the prospect
of going through it again.
The second
Promising Playwrights festival, happening tonight and tomorrow
(Thursday and Friday, June 12 and 13), will feature seven
one-acts. Tonight’s will be performed as staged readings,
acted by members of Dales’ Career Explorations in Performing
Arts class, an off-campus college-credit class that is part
of a series of “career explorations” programs offered by the
high school. Tomorrow’s performances will be readings, again
by the theater ensemble. “One of the coolest things about
this class is being able to connect curriculum to the after-school
program,” says Dales. He hopes next year to make it into one
four-day-long arts festival.
In the
meantime, he has at least made playwrights out of students
who hadn’t given much thought to the form. Since this was
the creative writing elective available at Albany High this
year, many students took it just because they had a general
interest in writing, not necessarily playwriting. Others say
they were intrigued by the idea of a new form. When I ask
about the differences from other writing they’ve done, they
get into a bit of a debate about whether it’s a harder form.
They “went nuts” when they first had to write something a
full 10 minutes long, recalls Schaefer. Senior Emily Thomas
says it was a challenge, having to use so much more dialogue.
“I think
scenes are easier [than other writing],” pipes up sophomore
Sophia Kolankowski.
Thomas
grins. “Yeah, I think that now.”
The
Promising Playwrights Festival 2 will take place today and
tomorrow (Thursday and Friday, June 12-13) at 7 PM at Albany
High School, 700 Washington Ave., Albany. Admission is $5,
$2 students/seniors.